JacobS

My TABLE OF CONTENTS includes my work as a writer this year. You will notice several drafts of many of my pieces. As you read my final copies, I ask that you notice my efforts to convey a clear, organized message, vivid images with precise word choice, and correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling designed to effectively share my ideas with you, my readers!

• a brief description of what you think you did well in the writing.
• the word **praise, raise, or elevate** depending on what feedback you want from your audience.

JacobS-Biopoem
I want you to comment on how well you think I described my personal inventory.

JacobS-Where I'm From
I want you to tell me if I should make some changes, why or why not.

JacobS-Snapshot Moment
Comment on what you thought was good, and comment on what could of been better.

JacobS-Perception Poem
Comment if you understand it or if you have trouble visualizing the scene.

JacobS-Estes Park Prologue
I want you to comment and tell me if I should swap anything out with something better or more descriptive.

JacobS-Snapshot Moment 2
Do you want me to do something different, keep it the same, or otherwise comment on something else you had in mind that could be helpful.